revised story for oldton

tim: glad you were moved by the story--that was why i did it...a response to your moving story.

a few revisions and additions to the story.... http://timwright.typepad.com/photos/sandra_semchuk/

it is fictional, a dialogue with you....the last number 9 the text is done by james nicholas, a Cree writer/actor. we both were thinking of the deaths of our own parents.

it would be good if the images could be seen each on their own page, background black in the size sent. if this is a problem let me know and i will make a website you can link to.

Sandra Semchuk